Monday, October 19, 2009

Day 2

We wake up and my arm is so sore and it is green and throbbing, and there is a coarse black hair growing out of it like the one the spider had! My first reaction is "Oh my goodness! I'm going to die! Or turn into a spider!". Everyone else is freaking out, we must find an antidote before its to late! but in the meantime, we all agree we had a terrible sleep even though we were exhausted we still know it wasn't the best of sleeps we've had in our lifetime. My back aches and I feel the ground where I was sleeping, and all I feel is hard bumpy rockiness, we must have been way to tired last night to do anything about the sleeping situation. We pack up our gear and then the tent and find a huge stash of fossilised crops and bugs, in cased in what seems like a jewel like rock that you can see through. Leah mentioned it looked like amber, and amber is good for healing and is what the native Maori used to use when medicine wasn't around. so that could be useful for my arm, so Emma, puts a piece of it on my arm and wraps it up in a bandage, it make me feel so much better straight away, so that's good.

Then we hear a rustling noise in the bushes, we all go silent, and look at each other, questioningly. What could it be? In hope it's not that giant spider again! Then suddenly out pops Malik. We all give a sigh of relief. "What the heck are you doing here?" asks Leah. "Oh, guys it's okay you can come out now." says Malik into the bushes. Which puzzles us. But then James and Mac both step out, "What are you guys doing here?" Morgan says confused. "We're thinking maybe we should make an alliance, you know, join forces?" James states. "Oh, um that's very sudden, why do you want us, what do we get out of it?" I say. "Well we will tel you our plan and what we wanted to do, but you have to tell us yours and then we can be a team. We know you guys are up to something we just don't know what." Malik says educated. "Well, that's exactly what we were thinking to." I say. "Okay then." we all said. "I guess we're a team. It's all agreed no backing out, and defiantly no double crossing." I say warningly. Then we exchange information and what our plan is going to be. We showed them my arm to prove what we saw, and they tell us what they were planning on doing.

I'm not going to say what their plan is, but I know we made the right decision, with making an alliance with them and forming a big team. So we all set off together to explore, and we come ac cross the middle of the island and the part that is surrounded in a river, I want to go over and explore, but once again the others are more apprehensive about this idea, I finally persuade Morgan to join me at going across the river which is only a couple of metres but is very deep then shallow, we get half way and then lots of eels come and surround us, every one starts screaming at us to look out! We scream and run as fast as we can through the water, thank goodness we get to the other side! Malik falls into the water, and can't turn back! He swims so fast but the eels are already there, James passes him a machete and he swipes at them and thank goodness he is okay! He swims over. Hes all right. We go off and explore, the forest is so thick, we finally get to a clearing, but, it's huge! like the size of a soccer field. Right at the middle is a strange structure like thing. We walk straight up to it, there are two symbols on it one up the top and one at eye level, I reach up and put my hand on one of the symbols that is shaped like a hand, but with four fingers. But as soon as I touch it I fall down and become unconscious, I am having a strange dream that I am flying through space so fast, zooming through the stars. But then I get woken. I'm fine. Malik uses his machete and reaches out the top to the eye-shaped symbol, and as soon as he touches it he collapses to and fall to the ground and his dream is that he is floating in space and directly in front of him is a huge pyramid, he feels he is going towards it and something important is going to happen but then I wake him up. We have a rope and a hatchet, we decide we need to climb up, we tie the rope to the hatchet and throw it up to the top, it comes back at us crashing down, we give it another go, this time it gets stuck up there and we pull it to make sure it is stable. It doesn't budge, I climb first and then after me, Morgan then Malik. When we get to the top there is a big open hole that is just never ending and I feel really curious about it, so we discuss it and decide one of us should climb down, I think I want to so I do. I sit on the edge and put my lower legs in, they won't move suddenly I'm stuck there and I can't get out, I'm very worried I ask the others what to do! "Well, you can't get out so will have to go in?" Morgan says worried. I give a cry of terror, but I've got to do it, I take hold of Morgans hand and slowly slide down, into the deep black hole. Suddenly I fall down into this dark open space that is just there and seems like there are no walls its just big and open. The others come down too, they must of come to see if I'm OK. Our eyes slowly adjust to the light or lack of light we can all see bright glowing round globes we walk over to them and Malik reaches out and touches one of them then a door opens, into like a control room for a space ship, it is so strange, it suddenly clicks that the big pyramid and triangular shaped things are UFOs or something!

We all try and click the buttons to see if it will start up, we keep seeing the four fingered hand print like its a key. It won't start. Then we hear strange gurgling noises like an alien language. Then we see big fat green alien like globs coming straight towards us, uh oh! We don't know if we should run or stay calm and still. We stay where we are there is no way to get away, they grab Malik and start talking in their weird little language and gurgle away, while we try and try to get Malik back then the other one grabs me and Morgan is screaming and they get her, and then take us to a little jail cell, and we are so over whelmed by all of this, I cry, and then so does Morgan, we all sit together huddled up trying to comfort one another, Malik is telling us it will be OK, but we're not so sure. Then after a while one of the scary green aliens come and deliver three cups and a jug of weird liquidy gross stuff. Malik dips his finger in it and says it tastes great so we all have some and we feel so great like never before and then suddenly we crash and hit a wall and have a very long sleep.


  1. oh this is just awsome maddy!

    i love the deep adjectives that you have used in the text. reading this sends shivers up my spine haha.


  2. I agree with love peace an happiness. This is great! Can't wait to read more...

  3. Can't wait to read it - first up I noticed a lack of paragraphs, but the writing seems very exciting.